tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post1573322770920309234..comments2023-12-16T15:55:01.741-08:00Comments on Oregon Gifts of Comfort and Joy: The Online Diary of a Central Oregon Grandmother: Writing In The Buff's Book Blurb Friday: "Girl's Gone Camping"Oregon Gifts of Comfort and Joyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07171271956883698673noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-9241699303803324412011-04-16T07:27:59.937-07:002011-04-16T07:27:59.937-07:00Hi Everybody!
Thanks for coming back if you had t...Hi Everybody!<br /><br />Thanks for coming back if you had to do that ... and thanks to you all for your opinions. I like the second one too ... I worked on it for about 4 days. Still not quite sure why I changed everything at the last minute.<br /><br />Have a wonderful week!<br /><br />KathyOregon Gifts of Comfort and Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07171271956883698673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-42040775179466308812011-04-15T19:20:31.549-07:002011-04-15T19:20:31.549-07:00I think I prefer the second one. And we're big...I think I prefer the second one. And we're big fans of those shows here. Even my 6-year-old likes them.Jennershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044537551139633301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-12430692409809268452011-04-15T16:57:42.564-07:002011-04-15T16:57:42.564-07:00Kathy,
I really like the second one although there...Kathy,<br />I really like the second one although there were parts of #1 that I liked also (the will she won't she like Jeff?) Really good writing especially the presmise of the reality show being produced. Exellent! <br />BTW, I love your header, it makes me want to step into the picture!<br /><br />~JeanMs.Daisyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01409193538202128355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-61812074653225106322011-04-15T16:24:03.109-07:002011-04-15T16:24:03.109-07:00I like number 2 better, much better. (Maybe becau...I like number 2 better, much better. (Maybe because of your descriptions?) Oh, and btw, now I have the song in my head! (And did you have to make her a blond? LOL! )Susan Fobeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10927064519907342393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-7914633292624714682011-04-15T15:07:35.437-07:002011-04-15T15:07:35.437-07:00Love how it sounds like it has a little bit of eve...Love how it sounds like it has a little bit of everything--nature, mystery, romance. Very tantalizing!Tammyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02141883867104777688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-84014486394943147572011-04-15T12:32:29.186-07:002011-04-15T12:32:29.186-07:00Kathy, wow you came up with two? I couldn't ev...Kathy, wow you came up with two? I couldn't even get to the end of one! I had a camping idea too, except it was about my protagonist hating to camp! (like me, I'm a city girl!!)<br /><br />I like the second one better although I love the kicker in the first "Jeff may be gorgeous, but he drives her crazy. Miriam wonders if she has a better chance fighting off the cougar."liberal sprinkleshttp://liberalsprinkles.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-67042544808041024862011-04-15T11:38:20.497-07:002011-04-15T11:38:20.497-07:00There both good, but I think the second one sounds...There both good, but I think the second one sounds better too! Nice job.Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05296300032567383021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-18290884538426450262011-04-15T09:40:57.692-07:002011-04-15T09:40:57.692-07:00I prefer the second one, too. It's much tighte...I prefer the second one, too. It's much tighter, more inviting:-)jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-10317075943794434082011-04-15T08:47:12.612-07:002011-04-15T08:47:12.612-07:00I think I like the second one much better. Seemed ...I think I like the second one much better. Seemed to get my attention faster and with more demanding questions in my mind...and I am not crazy about reality shows, so I might be biased!Bookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12043111213031211794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-58092684320598071002011-04-15T08:02:06.251-07:002011-04-15T08:02:06.251-07:00The non-appearance of Mike, rather than his disapp...The non-appearance of Mike, rather than his disappearance makes more sense, for me. I'd still want to know LOTS about Jeff & Sarah (and hope the cougar just walks off somewhere else!)Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-13883451808136553782011-04-15T07:40:26.915-07:002011-04-15T07:40:26.915-07:00Hi Everybody - Thanks so much for your comments. ...Hi Everybody - Thanks so much for your comments. I decided to add on to this post ... see if you like the other version better.Oregon Gifts of Comfort and Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07171271956883698673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-61916598035182611962011-04-15T07:13:48.187-07:002011-04-15T07:13:48.187-07:00Girls gone camping. Hehehe. Brilliant.
I haven...Girls gone camping. Hehehe. Brilliant.<br /><br />I haven't done a book blurb today. Too far behind with everything :(Ellie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-34603900166761669632011-04-15T06:57:00.519-07:002011-04-15T06:57:00.519-07:00A gorgeous man who's not your cup of tea just ...A gorgeous man who's not your cup of tea just might turn out to be a cup of poison. Maybe Miriam will discover a more attractive side to him - or not.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-2264761672301745522011-04-15T05:57:57.225-07:002011-04-15T05:57:57.225-07:00Kathy I love how you have the idea to turn this in...Kathy I love how you have the idea to turn this into a reality show. I want to know more!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05296300032567383021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-41845153172610289282011-04-15T03:58:53.244-07:002011-04-15T03:58:53.244-07:00I liked your premise and had to smile. Roamnce in ...I liked your premise and had to smile. Roamnce in the woods, or perhaps a twist? I'd read it.Linda O'Connellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15982895073903619018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-52488133315643424792011-04-14T21:54:02.535-07:002011-04-14T21:54:02.535-07:00I am so UNable to write romance, so I am always a ...I am so UNable to write romance, so I am always a bit green when I encounter writers who CAN. <br /><br />I think you have a great idea for a new book AND a marvelous idea for a new reality TV show.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-87298897195902511622011-04-14T21:46:18.795-07:002011-04-14T21:46:18.795-07:00I MUCH prefer human conflict to that with nature -...I MUCH prefer human conflict to that with nature - and look forward to hearing about tussles with the tantalising Jeff ... but where did Mike disappear to?<br />Definitely one to buy.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4834267977604421778.post-2605022024846135742011-04-14T20:36:36.460-07:002011-04-14T20:36:36.460-07:00Oooh, adventure and romance! Exactly how gorgeous ...Oooh, adventure and romance! Exactly how gorgeous IS Jeff? LOL Great blurb. I love the premise, Kathy. Very creative!Lisa Ricard Clarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05048410207952052295noreply@blogger.com